1) The pitch.
2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch.
I think I need to add more emotional in the elevator pitch after reading commend. And keep relevant with audience and recent situation.
3) What did you change, based on the feedback?
Relevant to today's situation more and serious. More focus on one target and put more emotions into the Video.
Hey Don,
ReplyDeleteI think you definitely brought the emotion that you were lacking in the last pitch. I think the pitch would be better if you set the camera up and then moved around vs holding the camera and moving. It looked like you were spinning around and that was a little distracting. I also think in the end, maybe don't hold the product right in front of your face when you're talking.
Hi Don,
ReplyDeleteFirst thing I noticed watching your elevator pitch was how animated you are during it. It is great and it makes your pitch extremely engaging. I like that you did your pitch relating it to the current situation, coronavirus 19. There is definitely a need for n95 masks right now and your pitch highlighted that need.